Thursday, 18 April 2013

Adventure Fiction Narrative

In class, we just finished our unit on adventure fiction. It would be really cool if you read it. If you see something good I did as a writer, I would like it you told me by adding a comment.

2 comments:

  1. Dear Tom,
    I really like your description in the story. I think that you should make more story's like that one.

    yo,
    Sophie

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  2. Wow Tom, this story is amazing. i like how you described things well and how you put the characters to talk a lot. Great job!! Yoony

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